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Post by Mr. Lavender on Nov 8, 2014 13:32:46 GMT -5
This is a new CAW I made. If enough people like, I might just put it up on the CAW Free Agent Poll. Enjoy.
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Post by ujroberts on Nov 8, 2014 16:24:13 GMT -5
Cool stuff.
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Post by Brent Delivine on Nov 8, 2014 17:04:15 GMT -5
Simply put, not a very creative CAW.
> The face morphing looks like Face Template 2 with a different skin texture. > Blue tattoo > Has a cliché of a schizophrenic emo > Korn as a theme > Ring announcer said he is from Mexico, Alex McMadden isn't a Mexican name.
Overall it doesn't look like you took a lot of time with this character to flesh it out and make it have life to it, it just looks like you played around in CAW mode throwing random stuff together and then just saving it.
I recommend finding tips and tricks to making a CAW stand out alittle more. Because this is really not a standard many will jump on to be brutally honest.
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Post by Mr. Lavender on Nov 8, 2014 18:13:24 GMT -5
Ok. I'll try to make it better Thanks for the tips.
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Post by Normster on Nov 9, 2014 8:24:25 GMT -5
Simply put, not a very creative CAW. > The face morphing looks like Face Template 2 with a different skin texture. > Blue tattoo > Has a cliché of a schizophrenic emo > Korn as a theme > Ring announcer said he is from Mexico, Alex McMadden isn't a Mexican name. Overall it doesn't look like you took a lot of time with this character to flesh it out and make it have life to it, it just looks like you played around in CAW mode throwing random stuff together and then just saving it. I recommend finding tips and tricks to making a CAW stand out alittle more. Because this is really not a standard many will jump on to be brutally honest. I will agree with all of those points except the name part. There are many people who's parents may have moved to a different country where that instance can happen. WE just automatically ASSUME that he's a full blooded Mexican because of the ring announcer. (Became THAT guy). However, Brent is correct on all of his other points. Work on your morphing and designs so that this guy will have some type of fleshed out character.
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Post by Brent Delivine on Nov 9, 2014 18:14:15 GMT -5
Simply put, not a very creative CAW. > The face morphing looks like Face Template 2 with a different skin texture. > Blue tattoo > Has a cliché of a schizophrenic emo > Korn as a theme > Ring announcer said he is from Mexico, Alex McMadden isn't a Mexican name. Overall it doesn't look like you took a lot of time with this character to flesh it out and make it have life to it, it just looks like you played around in CAW mode throwing random stuff together and then just saving it. I recommend finding tips and tricks to making a CAW stand out alittle more. Because this is really not a standard many will jump on to be brutally honest. I will agree with all of those points except the name part. There are many people who's parents may have moved to a different country where that instance can happen. WE just automatically ASSUME that he's a full blooded Mexican because of the ring announcer. (Became THAT guy). One thing wrong with your reasoning for this, though. Whenever a character is billed from a different country, it usually means they have to change their names to custom their new location.
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